Monday, November 21, 2005

REVISION!

Hey everyone. I revised swimming clothes for my english class. The revision is below this post. Please check it out. THERE ARE MAJOR CHANGES!!!!!

good ones though

GOOD PROVIDENCE

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

opinion on the revisions.....well due to the fact that i never read the original( it was long soooo....i skipped it).....i cant give you any opinion on the revision except.....its not any shorter than the first( that i did notice!!!).......but jus to make you feel good about ur self i'll lie and say..."OH...it was great!!!!".......ttyl!!!...(take a wild guess who.....*think sarcasm*)

Anonymous said...

Oh and sorry bout the loss sat......im guessin ur an AL fan( since you go there an all)......i felt the pain........and yelled at brodie and his sucky passes.....anyway...jus thought id say....too bad...maybe next yr........SUCK IT UP!!!

Anonymous said...

ROLL TIDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The tide is back (into the hole they came out of). There is only one team in the state. At least only one respectable team. Enjoy your tradition Alabama. That is going to have to keep you warm through a very long winter. This is why you wait until your team actually does something that is noteworthy before you stick your neck out. Beating the worst Tennessee team in 30 years and the worst Florida team in 20 years doesn't mean the dynasty is back. It only reaffirms what we all knew, the Tide is history. Rest in Peace Alabama you have gone the way of the dinosaur. The only way your children will even know about you is because of the Bryant Museum (if it is still standing by then). Auburn owns Brodie Croyle, they own Tuscaloosa, and they own Alabama. This is only the beginning. Welcome to a new age Alabama, you are the new Vanderbilt. And we will own you for many years to come. Only our streak over you might last longer than Tennessee's reign over Vandy. Who knows, you guys might beat us in 23 years. In the mean time, enjoy the echo's of Auburn fans from Saturday night "OVERRATED"!

Wayne Grayson said...

hahaha...wow. well im glad you got that out of your system...and thanks for leaving that comment on a post that has nothing to do with what you said...listen, the team you played saturday was NOT the team at the that it was five games ago...thats all i have to say. had it not been for costly injuries earlier in the season, and perhaps a quarterback change in the second quarter, the game would have been way closer (actually we would have won...). and i hope you've had fun these past four years beating a team who has had absolutely no recruiting prospects becuase of a tattle tail named Fat Phil in Tennessee. The thing is you should be worried that your awesome Tigers have struggled so much against the bottom of the list in high school recruits in the country. I guess what I mean to say is that you guys don't bother us. I walked out of Auburn saturday with the same colors I came in with on. CRIMSON AND WHITE. Whatever you ANONYMOUS AU fans that think you are so awesome and so smart for not putting your real name on this site, think that you can say to make me feel stupid for being an Alabama fan is completely a waste of your time. I mean you guys should know all about resiliance. Almost half a century without a National Championship and counting can do that to a team...you may be better than us...but being the best is something as foreign to you as TRADITION.

Brianna said...

Wow....